I went to France to mee my best friend in france to go to the Eiffel Tower restaurant to eat Shushi and we went to my friends apartment and I stayed the night at his apartment and we Watched 2 movies and we had 6 different snacks and we both fell asleep and we slept for 10 hours and the next day we went to the Ferris wheel and we went to the ferry floss shop and we went to the shop’s and we bought Gucci shoes and we went to Big W market places to buy lot of food.
Hi Loki,
I loved that your story took place in France! Good job beginning your story with the location, which was our technique of the week. One thing to work on next time will be to break up your writing into sentences. This will make your story easier to read. Keep on writing!